I haven't written anything in a while, just thought I'd drop a line and post some things that i thought you would like to read....so here's the first one and I hope you comment and tell me what I could do to make it better.....like not write it...lol

A 19 year old male enters,standing 6'7,with spiked black hair and green tips.His eyes are bright green.He wears a black shirt with green flames rising to his chest under a green hoody and a pair of forest green cargo pants with black flames rising from the bottoms.He wears air force ones which are black with green flames around them with fat,green and black,untied laces.He closes the door and you see his green biker gloves with black,frayed fingers and his matching wristbands.He has 4,10' black wings with green feathers and two 5'swords with black chainsaw blades that have green fire around them with green hilts and green fireballs on the blades.They're connected to his wrists by black chains with green fire around them.He has 2 green flame studs in each ear.His hands glow with green flames.